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Burchell is unafraid to write his poems using variations of meter and with stanzas ranging from triplets to quintains to free verse to help capture the essence of the woman he is 'expressing'. The styles used are as varied as the women themselves, which both refreshes the text and helps to honour the importance of the message being conveyed. These women, Burchell seems to be saying, are organic creatures and will not be confined within the cage of repetitious four-line stanzas. The poetry should be moulded to who they are, and not the other way around. Elle's Competitive Nature, one of the strongest poems in the collection and perhaps the longest, is written in a series of broken stanzas that scatter across two pages as we learn of her difficulties that come from having 'breasts and brain' too big for her body. Elle, 'strong willed yet brittle' has a strong fear of commitment, pregnancy, life, death. We emerge from the poem with a strong sense of this woman, aided in no small manner by the way in which it was composed, all jagged stanzas and broken lines.
Damian Kelleher for Four Volts Magazine (Click HERE to read Damian's full review)
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